DOOD SERIOUSLY LET ME READ YOUR STUFF FOR MISTAKES. I KNOW THIS IS OLD AND YOU'VE GOTTEN MUCH BETTER WITH IT BUT SRSLY. I'M GOOD WITH THAT STUFF.
AWESOME STORY THO. KEEP GOING. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AT THE PARK.

WAIT WTF? SHE'S PREGNANT AGAIN? PLEASE TELL ME THAT'S A MISTAKE CAUSE OTHERWISE I'M CONFUSED.
OH AND COLOUR IN YOUR ROOM. METAPHOR FOR GIVE ME SOME ADULT TIME. OH YEAH. IDK EVERYTHING IS AMUSING TO ME RIGHT NOW.

Dude, this is great, but such short chapters omg. Either way, it's good. Sara's reaction of "Shit it is" is so Sara it hurts. Great job.

Short, but sweet. Grissom is just so straightforward. Love it.

AWW SO CUTE YES, I AM READING ALL YOUR STORIES BECAUSE I AM NOT TIRED AND YOUR STORIES ROCK.

Good story please update!

Wait, did you say that Sara was pregnant (again?)

oh wow mega GSR more please

oh I can feel some tension going on.

So the little darling is Grissom's daughter.:)

My guess is Grissom will confront Sara and she will tell him that yes she is his daughter. But I think he will tell her that he still loves her like the first day they met. How many chapter will this story have?

good start

He gave up so easily