Hiya! I saw the review you left my friend Sparkles, and since you have been so kind as to review both her story and mine, I would return the favor. I like how you had an emphasis on the real world. . .breaking away from rowling's ideas, kinda. That's good! Oh and how could you not like LOTR? It's the best, the basis for all fantasy. Well c-ya around and write ASAP.

Woohoo! Now that was cool! You're some good writer, I'm tellin ya. I'm not really one for suggestions cuz I have enough problems trying to figure out what to do with my OWN story, but I think he should fall in love again. One of those "Learn to let go" kinda deals, I dunno. And how could you not like LOTR? I went to see it four times and I still love it! Oh well, to each his own. Keep writing! And if it's not too much trouble, could you maybe please check out my story, Legend of the Faerie? You don't have to read it all, but take a look-see and tell me what you think? It's only 6 chapters, and they're all short. Pwease? I appreciate you reviewing my poem. . But you're prolly sick of this never-ending review by now, so I think I'm gonna end it. But if it's never ending, how can I end it you ask? I'll show you. Just like this.

THIS STILL KICKS ASS! lol, I do really like this! There better be more.. *psycotic look in eyes* or else...

I read this in Basilisk's MST- and I really liked the sound of it! You should continue- and not make Graham a Mary-Sue. lol, he's awsome so far! And this is a really good start for a fic! WRITE MORE PLEASE! Also- thanks for reviewing "What's my Age Again".

very well written...it really set the mood and tone, without being overly labored. i liked it 8-)

Hey, this is me, Shining Moonlight (you reviewed my story The Origin of Evil) and I'd like to say thank you. Your story touched me deeply. I'm serious, I got tears. I know that you are absolutely right that it won't go away unless you tell someone and do something about it, but really, it never goes away. I know. I'm only 13, but I've been through it and it doesn't just go away. Sure, you feel hope when you see the bastard in handcuffs, but it gets crushed when he gets away. The story I wrote wasn't just fantasy. Adam. He isn't fake. He's my worst nightmare come true, and he still walks free, I still have to pass him in the halls at school everyday. It's torture. And the happy ending in my story is the only fiction. I didn't get to go away, and he isn't sorry. I have clinical depression because of the jerk, and the worst thing is how many people found out. It's like he's proud of it. I'll tell you, I'm ashamed. I feel dirty, and it's been almost a year. Bless you and Alicia, and may peace fill your days. *Kassidy*

Hey guys it's me, the author. For some reason I got around six e-mails asking me to continue writing more on this story, (but they didn't post any reviews *mumbles something that sounds like "bastards"* :p) but I didn't really plan on this. I'd be more than happy to write more about Graham Pritchard but I don't really have any idea where to continue. I'm currently writing chapter1 for Black Horizon and Prologue for a Harry Potter/The Matrix fanfic. So I'd really appreciate (for some reason that doesn't look right) it if you guys could send some ideas on how to expand. I just got an interesting idea, maybe I should put Graham in some sort of D-Day experience? hhmm, that would certainly be an interesting bit to write. but keep those ideas and reviews coming. While I'm at it, thanks billions to all those people who bothered to write a review, couldn't have done it without you and I'll be thinking Sparkles-Chan, Ashliebelle and Ginavere when I'm a world famous writer ;). (if more people review my stories, I'll be thinking of them too ))

Wow, I really liked this story. You did a great job, and I really enjoyed it. I hope you continue this soon! I'll be reviewing if you do!

*Kiley*

Not bad. I liked the mood of your story. Here's a tip if you would like more reviews. Review other stories yourself. Alot of authors review at least one of the stories of the people that reviews theirs, espically authors tthat aren't getting a million signed reviews per story. good luck! -gin

man Kamil, trust you to write a HP story, you suck!