LOL! I could see that handcuffing happening. Maybe another Sparky Story?

This story's really good! I like the length; it's to the point without leaving out any Sparky goodness! Great job! =]

I think you did a great job finishing this.
I like that the woman who planted the bomb didn't seem like someone who would do that but at the same time is so creepy. Those last lines she said to John... *shivers* John was perfectly written, just like him so caring and protective. And the last part with the handcuffs brightened up the story, very funny. :D
Great job!

Well you didn't do that badly I thought. Great job!

Thanks for finishing the story - it must be difficult to come in in the middle and finish off, well done and nice story from both of you.

Oohlaalaa, this should be good!
No spelling or grammar mistakes that I saw either.
Great job!
Can't wait for more =)
xoxo

oh gosh. absolutely loved hwo its written perfect scenes and I WANT TEH NEXT CHAPTER SOON. can wiat!
Sparkly

Ahh! That was quite an evil cliffhanger! ; ) This is a really good story so far, I can't wait for the rest of it.

What a thrilling start! Very good.

About time! I've waited ages! But not bad!

Great story can't wait for more

*glares at Fred* You evil muse, you!

Great story!!