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DCgirl 2/9/04 . chapter 1
I read this story a while back, but it took awhile to find it again lol. As a deaf fanfic author let me just say that I'm very impressed with your writing skills, even if I dont' agree with all your character's choices). Keep up the good work. Email me if you ever need help.
DC
Mickie1 3/19/02 . chapter 15
Poor Trip! that's soooo sad. It was a very good ending though. Think you'll ever feel like writing a sequel?
novelwriter 3/18/02 . chapter 1
Hi,
Story premise with a hearing impaired person. I liked that idea. Her translater was a pain though. Did you on purpose give him the same first name as Captain Archer? I know it is common but I found that a bit confusing. I don't want to sound mean but when he died I was kind of relieved because then she could live her life her way and I would not get too confused at which Jonathan was talking.

My husband is blind so I have to say that made me appreciate a disabled person story.
Casey Greene 3/8/02 . chapter 12
Aww! Who cares if it's a Mary Sue? I like it! It's cute! More, more, please!
Arwen 3/7/02 . chapter 12
This story is a lot of fun! I love the way you've had Amber transition over to hearing. Just one small little thing thats bothering me, so please don't take it personally... Amber's been on board for what, a month? Maybe not that long? And the Commander of starship feels strongly enough about an ensign to be dating her? Major protocol breach. But this isn't real military so I guess it doesn't really matter.
Rae Holland 3/7/02 . chapter 12
Excelleent read. Cannot wait for the next instalment. It actually reminds me of my childhood, as I was born deaf and then started to hear when I was 4 years old, so a very big thank you for helping relive my past.
Sarahjane 3/3/02 . chapter 11
I'm sorry, but I have to say that this is such a Mary Sue! The premise was interesting, but now it has totally degenerated into another "author-vaguely-disguises-herself-as-a-character-in-order-to-hook-herself-up-with-a-cute-main-character" fic.
Casey Greene 2/28/02 . chapter 11
aww!
Emily M. Hanson 2/28/02 . chapter 11
I finally had time to finish reading this and wow, I must say that it's very good. Keep writing!)
Christina TM 2/28/02 . chapter 11
Hi all. Just want to say thanks for reviewing and telling me how much you like this story! Also want to say something that, up till now, I haven't really had to say...I will write another chapter regardless of whether I get more reviews, but I have more incentive if someone actaully reviews asking for another chapter. So, if you want ch12...R&R!
areil too lazy to sign in 2/26/02 . chapter 10
Ahhhh! Cliffhanger! I just started reading your story and it's really good. In a way I can identify with Amber, because I am a diabetic and people get so overprotective like John. People who know nothing boss you around and tell you what to do like they know everything and you don't. It can be really frustrating. I really like your story though and I hope you hurry and write the next chapter!
Casey Greene 2/23/02 . chapter 10
Eeeep! Noooooo! Why why why why why! Is it sensory overload? Oh, she better be okay! Send her a get-well-soon card for me!
Casey Greene 2/20/02 . chapter 9
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Casey Greene 2/20/02 . chapter 8
Hehehe, crash...thump...how bout boing?
bloodredcherry 2/19/02 . chapter 9
great stuff so far!
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