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Sarah
2009-05-02 . chapter 11
Brava! Brava! AND hilarious!
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 11
*giggles* I like that ending... Even though it's a strange idea to think of HJo Rowling as nothing but an catress who plays the role of an author...
CHO gave Harry love portion? That's really, really not nice of her! ;)
even if something bad happens in the sequal of the story, it's nice to think that all in all these kids had a happy life in this world! ;)
Thanks for writing this wonderful story! (can it be that all your storys allways get longer than planned in the beginning? Not that i complain, mind you...)
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 10
Hi,
hm... the whole soul-saving thing is kinda confusing, but I like it anyway... So Peri could get Neenie to stay alive, and get born because at the same time she is doing something similar for Narcissa, by adopting the soul of the kid who would have been Draco as her own? And poor Narcissa will die? Well, she did bad things, but I still feel sad for her... But then, she probably will have an interesting and good afterlife!
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 9
OY! Did you just kill Sirius and Regulus? you can't have done so! I mean... they are alive in the other story that's kind of the sequal to this... But how the heck could they have survived this? Power of love, I suppose, or something like this... both of them not getting the WHOLE killing course, too... but darn, I am still worried!
"Not my husband, you **!" Peri is channelling Molly there! *giggles*
good chapter! :)
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 8
Hi,
I am starting to think I should have read the other story before this one...
Little Dora is cute! and she has a tiny girl-crush on Remus... Well, she will grow out of it and love Charlie! ;)
It seems this Lucius is a bit nicer than the one you normally portray. - And this Narcissa a bit more arrogant! Kinda more canon, I suppose...
But Cissy will decide whatever is important to save her child... At least you won't kill THIS unborn baby... Even though I don't know how Peri and Veri want to do that... I know the outcome, of course, but HOW do they DO that?
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 7
THERE is Evanie! Now I am happy, even though poor girl went through hell... - but at least now there she is, little Evanie, who does nto look like anything special, but is so much stronger then she looks or even thinks of herself and has a very good heart. - I actually think she is one of your inventions I like best (and I wonder how I could confuse Luna's mum with her... my mind might have been mseed up there!)
Good to know Sev helped the others... or at least is trying to do so... And what he can be to Lily Potter? A friend, maybe the best friend! Not more, but it's more than he might think...
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 6
Hey, that IS evil! you killed Remus' kid before it was even born! ... What is it with you killing unborns, huh? :P ;)
Hmm, about the woman with the "wide blue eyes" a few chapters before: She might have been Luna's mum... silly me, she WAS Luna's mum! Why did I need so much time to realize?
I hope Peri and Remus will be all right soon. - Both of them have others to help, but it's still hurtful...
So they know where the horcruxes are? That's good!
Great chapter!
Bye, Tam
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 5
Well, I really hope Sirius is not just trying to set up Veri, but actually DOES fall in love with her. - SOON!
nice chapter,there! :)
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 4
WOAH!, WILL these two finally stop fighting and start realizing they are made for each other?
Well, I suppose for Remus and Danger (or whatever name she has in THIS story... "Pericula", maybe) it's allways love on first sight... But Sirius and (this version of) Letha have quite a temper...
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 3
Hm... LETHA! (Or at least the version of her that fits into this story!) ... Well, Sirius and her fight. - But I have a feeling that won't be forever! ;)
Now, what did Lily find out? and what's the black object Albus gave the marauders on their way?
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 2
Mortality Munchers? *giggles* I like it!
I don't know who Remus talked too... But I know why Sirius' story sounds famila ro me! It's nearly exactly what happend to him in canon, even though THERE he could use magic... but he still could not go out of the headquarters por anything...
That girl... that girl... who is she? Evanie? Maybe... but maybe not... ARGH!
Tamira
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
Hi,
is this, kinda, the back-story to "going Home"?
Anyway, it's interesting! :)
AnnaBrownie
2009-02-26 . chapter 11
Wow, another awesome story. I actually read Coming Home first, not realising that it was a sort of AU-ish sequel to this, and they are both great (as usual). Like the way these have Evanie from "Till We Reach That Day", and that Peter, Snape and Regulus are redeemed and survive! Now you have done these two, might we now have a return to a previously scheduled progam - like Facing Danger or Be Careful? Pretty please...
The Serendipity
2009-02-21 . chapter 11
I having mean to say about this. I loved the ending. Humorous and satisfying, and utterly entrancing. Bravo.
Saffygirl
2009-02-21 . chapter 11
OMG, this was an awesome way to end this!
I CANNOT wait for the sequel!
Are you going to be updating Be Careful or Facing Danger soon too?
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