Ive seen this on your website man! Amazing story! One thing wrong though: Mewtwo CANT LOVE? Poor guy!

This was one of the greatest Mewtwo fics that I've ever read in quite a while! Good job!

This was definitely a great story. There were two flaws, however that make me give this story a 9.98/10
1. This story was a very long read. Chaptering would have been nice.

2. You appear to have been taking attack names from different Pokemon card versions of Mewtwo. (Energy Absorption-Movie Promo, Psycho Crash-Vending series, etc.) You have one called "Change Damage". You must have an old version of Apprentice (if this is where you got them from)-the attack's correct name is Juxtapose.

Otherwise, great story-I sent it to all my friends.

Hmmm What a Interesting Story. Although there are many things I might not agree with in here it's still a good and interesting story. I can't say to much more then that because of how I feel about certain things Towards it. But I wont Put the story down just because I don't agree with some things. Although not my "piece of pie" it still is a interesting story. I'd like to see more of your work. H. Falcon

... aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! i quite injoyed that! it was cute! uh... i mean cool! *smiles* mewtwo is my most fave. pokemon. on my gameboy he kicks a and NEVER loses... i'm so happy! i got Mewtwo Returns right after it came out. (for all you people that don't know what Mewtwo Returns is its a movie that came out Dec. 4th. go get it!)