MOOOOOOOORE CHAPTERS PLEASE, this story is fantastic.

aha! Ty took Kavar with her! there must be something between them again! [I know that it was propably only because of his Jedi skills, but let me dream about their great futre for a while
anyway, great chapter again and great battle desciribng. thanks for very quick update, you made my day again)

aaaaargh this is so fantastic, I want new chapters!

Ow, this is great! I never thought about this pairing but you made it wonderfull. Please write more chapters. You described them so perfectly, they deserve to end together!

I like the new memories in every chapter idea. It helps build up more of the story.

Vrook..-his- Anyway, now that that is out of my system, FANTASTIC! This is amazing and has brightened my day considerably. Tyla is pretty much the most amazing Exile character I've ever had the pleasure of reading about. Also, you ae quite possibly the reason why I ship Exile/Kavar. Keep up the amazing work!

Chaseon \m/\m/

Hmm, very interesting. Yes, continue. Less Bastila, more men.

And please try to avoid giving Zas Cian a villian/old woman with wisdom speech. :3

Very good-nice to see the beginnings, but be careful of mispelled words like where for were etc-and what happened to their planet? Readers like to know that kind of stuff, but you hooked me with the characterizations-at 6 Revan is already a handful. AWESOME!

Really very good and disturbing-I had Revan be more than just a vision in on eof my stories so I was glad you picked up on the fact Revan gives the Exile something-a lightsaber-none of the other visions did that-so well written and I look forward to more.

Keep up the good work!

Tis' good chicka! Nami