All I can really say is...I LOVE THIS! It's so cute! And the nostalgia and realizing that they could have bigger dreams and all was really great! XD

I love that someone's writing Bakuman fanfiction, I love that manga! And another thing is, you do it so bloody well! :D

I like your writing style _ I think it managed to portray Mashiro's personality well, and personally, I think that there's a sort of innocence in how Mashiro viewed things, but that made it much sweeter. :3

This is a great story. I like the realistic take on Mashiro and Takashi's future careers and their persevering bond. And the way Mashiro and Azuki's relationship (didn't really) develop was really adorable, spot on characterization. XD

Looking forward to Takagi's oneshot!

This is a really nice view about their lives in the future, I think it's realistic and very fitting for the manga, expecially Mashiro and Shujin's relationship. I enjoyed reading it, and I hope you keep writing Bakuman fanfics!

taoT

Very nicely done! I love how Shujin and Mashiro continued to dream even when their attempts have failed before