 azab 2009-06-16 . chapter 1lived it great job :> |
 la-quinn 2009-03-13 . chapter 1I love this. It's just what angela would say. PLease if you have time could you read my heroes fan-fiction (Only human). It's not as good as yours but, what the heck. |
 ned 2009-02-11 . chapter 1 very good fic
i like that you gave us an insight to Angela's thoughts on her son nathan |
 ThePandoraRose 2009-02-10 . chapter 1Very well done. Choppy in parts, but I adore your themes and you have a way to create an image. Keep up the good work. Very, very in character. |
 xPaInFulXiNsAnItYx 2009-02-10 . chapter 1Amazing. Simply amazing. I could feel Angela's feelings right then and there, and i know it is exactly what she would say to Nathan.
Keep up the brilliant work. I would ask for you to right more, but you have already written over 20 Heroes fics (which, i must say, is quite an acheivement!).
Well done. |
 Fayee 2009-02-10 . chapter 1 Beautifully written, completely loved this.
I have not seen Volume Two yet, as they have not aired it in England yet, but hopefully they will soon!
You really made me feel the emotions that Angela was feeling, which is great. And also, i love how you put it into a letter, instead of her expressing it to Nathan face-to-face, because i really doubt that she would do that.
Keep up the excellent work. |
 AJeff 2009-02-10 . chapter 1It's exactly what Angela would have said to her first born. I could clearly see her and hear her voice as I read your letter. A mother loves her child no matter what.
"When you called me, part of me wanted to wrap my arms around you and tell you everything would be okay. Because that is what a mother is compelled to do. But I will not lie to you Nathan, I love you too much." So true. Well said.
I'd love it for Nathan to reply to "Ma" being that he is mama's boy. |