...D...tesal...TT...nooo why must you kill him!

Why? Poor Tesla, and no, it wasn't OOC. It was perfect, and so, so sad, it made ma cry for Tesla
And I'm very glad you got his eye colour right. Too many people think it's blue .

BUT AS CONSOLATION

Kubo said that Nnoitra did feel sad when Tesla got killed, so there's some kind of feeling there in canon
And Tesla's surname is Lindocruz. Suits him, doesn't it?

Awwww! Poor sweet Tes TT Damn, you managed to keep everyone in character wonderfully especially Tesla. Damn, now I have to go read a happy fic to cheer myself up again. This is really well-written, keep up the good work.

Ack ! That was the saddest story I have read featuring Nnoitra, Szayel and Tesla. I pity Tesla, but he should've told Szayel... Ah So sad so sad... So awesome.

Though a tragedy fanfiction, you communicate much more through this oneshot. It's the amount of descriptive that keeps readers like me interested, and the way you tell the story in an incredibly mind-snaring. Wonderful work, keep writing!

Aw it's so sweet! I love it! Hahah Tesla drunk...imagine that?

Aww, it is pretty sad. But, I am a sucker for sad endings.

Poor Tesla, he never actually deserved a sad ending, now, did he?

Really is a beautiful fan fiction, though )

No! It wasn't OOC, it was great! So sad...

Very nicely done. It was sad to see Tesla deteriorate and finally break in the way that he did, but it was touching to see how much the Szayel and some of the others tried to help him. Powerful and bittersweet, excellent work.

he dies! ;_; poor Tesla! Great story, I read it all the way to the end and don't worry, I didn't find it OOC