oh, continue! i've always wondered what life was before the show, and now we know! and i'm with you- i hated that it took so many years for them to get together! this hasn't been updated in a while, i notice, are you still writing? please update!

COR BLIMEY, THIS STORY IS BLOODY GOOD!
so um...more please?!

Aw! So cute. Poor Luke though.
Update ASAP.
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Hello,

Aww :) :)

Great work

Rhr4eva

Hello,

Hahahaha aww Rory :)

Great work

Rhr4eva

Hello,

Aww :) :)

Great work

Rhr4eva

Hello,

Aw :) :) :) Yayy!

Great work

Rhr4eva

Looking forward to finding out why Lorelai fled the scene. You are doing a great job with this story.

Aw, poor Loreali got cold feet. To bad. maybe she rethink this and go back. (If were lucky.)

Wendy

OHMYGOD. You CANNOT end there! I have been reading non-stop and now it's the end with this horrible, wonderful cliffhanger. COME ON! =D This is absolutely fabulous and I love it. Great job! PleasepleasePLEASE keep them coming!

I'm enthralled! I can't quit reading. This is fabulous and the dialog is so spot on the characters! Great job so far!

Just to make an observation...in chapter one, you list Rory as being eleven years old, but in chapter two, you set a scene with her and Lane at the high school. Hm...

Why is she being like that! Rude! But still. I love luke :) Great Story!

Ok, you know I love you, so just remember that when you read the words below.

you suck. Seriously? Bad Turtle. Bad bad turtle. Loved Sniffy's and the date, and Rory approving. Okay, I understand the no dirty thing, but leaving him like that? COME ON. Poor Luke :(

Okay, writing wise, very good. Loved the store room convo and that Kirk heard it in the bathroom, aha that made me laugh. Picture it in your head, seriously ahaha.

Okay, despite the fact that you suck, I still love you, and I know you'll fix it. :D

Your Rover :P

What? Why? Hope Lorelai comes to her senses and goes back to Luke. Why did she lie? Oh so many questions!! Lol. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happnes next.