Found this story a week ago, and just could not stop reading! I really enjoyed it, can't believe your not writing more! :( But I understand.

Thanks for the great story!

This makes no sense. In the series, Luke got mad and broke up with Lorelai because Christopher revealed that she'd seen him behind Luke's back (getting drunk with him, not actually sleeping with him or anything, and then only because of his father's death, but still...) and then - the worse mistake - lied to Luke's face about it the next morning. Here, Lorelai hasn't done anything wrong, hasn't lied to Luke or misled him, and there's no reason for Luke OR for Rory to be giving Lorelai such crappy treatment.

I could tolerate the many, many proof-reading errors for the sake of the story up until now, but this is where I have to stop reading, because it doesn't make sense for any of this to be happening now. The characters are acting too irrationally and out of character, given their different history so far.

so just thought I'd throw it out there, I'm totally in love with this fic. skillfully avoiding homework by spending my night reading this, and jeebus it's awesome:)

Cute! I can't wait to read more!

Don't give up you may feel as though this story has become a burden to you but in reality it's just a temporary set back to how you feel now I'm sure that you will wake up tomorrow feeling as though you could wright ten pages and if not please write about how Lorealia tell her parents about her being pregnant I want to read what they do, so please just wright one more chapter let your fingers do the walking write just one more chapter that is all I ask off you and if you do this I won't wright you any more and this will be the last you hear from me,
please write me back as I want to know what you have decided

Oh my god, update! This is amazing!

Absolutely loving this story so far, please update as quickly as possible. You write all the characters extremely well, I can hear each of the characters saying the things you write. Can't wait to find out what Emily and Richard make of this pregnancy!

I. Love. This. Story. Every day when I get the chance, I read it. What I think is so great about it is that you get a good look at the early lives of the Gilmore Girls. You do a great job at including pieces of the show that reference the early years.

Just wanted to point out a small mistake. Rachel isn't the only girl Luke has had relations with. Anna Nardini. In the show when his daughter April showed up Rory was 21 and April was 12. Making it a 9 year difference. So with Rory being 12 in this book April would be 3... Just saying

This is awesome, only just found this story again and can't wait to see more! I can't wait to see the disaster that will be Lorelai telling her parents about the baby, the fact that they already aren't fond of Luke definatly wont help the situation, but glad to see your coming back into the game and are continuing on with this story! please update soon and keep the brilliant work.
Cheers

I love your story please write more soon. I've been keeping up with your story since 2010 and just can not wait for you to update.

looking forward to seeing Emily and Richard come to the Crap Shack.

Congrats to Luke and Lorelai.

Aw. pen pals.

Oh boy uh oh