This was really good! You definitely have a talent for writing... good descriptions and dialogue. The friendship between Henri and Lafayette is so sweet. I like the part when Henri said he'd be willing to protect Lafayette during battle by throwing rocks at the British. Aw, he's so cute & brave! :-) Looking forward to reading more LK stories from you! *thumbs up*

Awesome one-shot! Good to know i'm not the only one with a thing for Lafayette ^_^!

Aww!! I couldn't help smirking throughout the whole thing; it's so well-defined :D

And wow .__. Lafayette's got quite a few fans, doesn't he >_>

I like how you write -- your couple of stories for this fandom asofar have been some of the best I've read here.

And good explanation on reading the Declaration in more than one language, good way to define its importance.

FAVE!

~PT

This was really good! You should really write another story like this. I just love Henri and Lafayette :) They're my favorites.

Yay! A LK story has a historical figure in it! I think you wrote the relationship between Henri and Lafayette very well.