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Reviews for: Fragment: My Dearest Moony
ena-black
2009-03-08 . chapter 1
so beautiful.
Simplybofa
2009-02-18 . chapter 1
Bwaa! I'm actually crying! Real tears! I miss Sirius the most!! Sniff. The pawprint is what got me good. So wonderfully sad. Great job.
Green Peppers
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
Thank you so much for no typos/grammatical errors! Or at least none that I spotted. I like your writing style, and I the tone flowed perfectly with the change of emotion in the words. Nice job!
XxXFading-With-TimeXxX
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
omw that is so sad! poor sirius! this is really good!
rekahneko
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
Aww
That is so sweet and sad.
Very well done.
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sierra's scarlet
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
Are you in a plot to make us cry. So sweet.

Right, um, good story, I like the comment about when Harry's old enough to receive the motorbike. I'm glad Sirius will take care of Remus (observe, I refrain from shortening their names even though I want to), even though Moony doesn't like it. Good job.
Blue-Eyed Chica
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
AW SO CUTE!! and super sad!!
TeddyBear 8P
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
Awe! You should have a chapte of him writing it.
But if you put one of Remie reading it I'm garenteed to cry.
Awe, this is adorable. I love it!!
sick-atxxheart
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. Nice job.
erhutch
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
aww that was soo cute =]
but it almost sounded like they were lovers
but it was really good
ElvesWizardsCentaursOhmy
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
That was so good and cute =). Remus/Sirius is one of my favorite pairings, I don't know why. ANyway good job. =)
AyanamiEraclea
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
This was so sad in a really funny, cute way.

I loved it.
Bloody Dead And Sexy
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
So sweet (^.^) i like it but it has some OOCs because i don't think that Sirius would write like that. It doesn't have his stile. I can't imagine him in that way. But is a good fic, after all.
Maths Is Immortal
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
Aww, nice work! :) You managed to keep such a potentially gloomy topic light and humourous, without losing the sentiment of the piece. You should be really proud of this! I know that I enjoyed it a great deal!
alix33
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
This whole ficlet was IMO very sad, but I really nearly cried at that paw print (my baby sis has a Jack Russell and a spaniel - until the end of May they are her only "children" - and they always sign the family's birthday and Christmas cards with paw prints (using food colouring instead of possibly poisonous ink), too)!
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