This Totally brings to mind...

Chains and whips excite me, so tie me up and smack my ass and tell me that you like me! I have no clue why but it does. I love they way this was written. Violent sex, wippy-k-ya!

In all I loved it.

-RT

:D

Just got into RikuRoku...like 5 minutes ago.

HOT!!

This was nice. ;D

So disturbingly amazing...

Violent!sex ftw. I can't see them mushy either...mostly because they're both angsty teenagers.

And Roxas just...fits the masochist role so nicely~...

They wouldn't be them without the violent!sex XD; I was a little confused at the start, but it was a nice read. :) Been a while since I read violence for these two. :o

Keep on writing~ :)

I think I love you!

I must say, as Riku x Roxas is one of my favourite pairings I've read a lot of fanfictions for them and this is now one of the best, even with its oneshot-ness.

This was brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Those two have always had a violent, competative and clearly abusive relationship, and you've managed to capture it perfectly here. Roxas is insane, but in a way that I fully believe his insanity, and clearly he's well aware of it. I'm curious to know the background story for this one, and to see how their relationship played out before things exploded into this. And even the aftermath to this...alright I would simply love to see you write more for this story, either before or after this particular section.

Well, that's all I have for the moment. Happy writing, and best of luck with the rest of things.
-Rue

OH MY GOD YOU WRITE RIKU/ROXAS I FREAKING LOVE YOU EVEN MORE

I cant see that either, they seem like they'd be full of loathing and angry angry sex, definitely two of the angriest Kingdom characters.
You are my favourite writer, and you havn't let me down.
Epik as always.
Thanks very very much.
For exsisting.
-Mara

oh man, whut? that was freaking hot. thank you kairi, for being the catalyst! uke!roxas and seme!riku. hot. very.

I IMPLORE YOU, WRITE MORE SMUT. kthxbai.

OMG.

LOOK! It's ME!

Ahn, I'm so sorry for being suckish, but I hope you'll forgive me. :( This won't be as long as I would have hoped but I needed to get this out now. So, sorry /AGAIN/ for said suckage.

Firstly, I am in the /process/ of writing reviews for your other stories (my record, godammit!) so expect some nice long ones in about three weeks time. Why three weeks, you may ask? Well, I'm going on my Spanish exchange this weekend. O_O

Now, onto the story at hand.

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O_e

That was fucking nuts. AND I LOVED IT! :D

RikuRoku is hot. And I never noticed before! Darn! *Starts hunting for other RikuRoku fics*

Ahahaha, Roxas threw Kairi out a window. That made me laugh. I could totally imagine that. But why didn't she die? That's what I wanna know. Also, even though Roxas says /he's/ the two-timing slut, I think they're all at fault. I mean, damn, Kairi must have known he was taken. But TEH SEX GOD RIKU. :P Also, Riku also slept with Kairi. Doesn't that make him just as bad? I think that Kairi's the bad guy in this. Maybe it's because I like yaoi and I /may/ be bias but what can ya do?

Also, I’m kinda glad that Roxas knows he’s crazy. I mean, at least he’s a crazy dude who /knows/ how crazy he is and tries to suppress it. Riku is lethal, dude. First he sends a little boy on a quest to save a world just ‘cause he’s gone mental and then he makes Roxas go round the bend.

Not cool, dude.

Not cool.

The buttsecks was like, OMG MY INNOCENT EYES! I MUST NOT LOOK! But, *whines* I want to.

D:

All in all, what can I say but, as usual, it was brilliant. :D

I need MOAR of your fics! MOAR!

-Tasha

PS

I’ll review both chapters of YDCF and all the other fics I haven’t, including my gift-fic, which I love like a baby and water every day, in hopes that it will grow up. Also, it was my birthday Friday! *parties* Ugh, didn’t go to sleep until 6 am. *Still tired* XD But then, you’re up all hours, ne?

OH GOD.

That was so sick and strangely hot. And painful. And Roxas. Is fucking crazy.