Oh this is really good, I'm hooked already! PLease update soon xx

pleeaasse continue the fic!

it's fantastic i'm loving it

pleeaasse

see you

ps: sorry if I writte something wrong but I'm brazilian so I cant writte very well I prefer just read...
ps2: story add to favorits

I liked it =) the ending is a little disappointing but oh well! overall graet job!

very good story so far. i very much like it and i love this movie tons!! keep going i can't wait to read more!

Great story. i hope you update soon. i am waiting for what patrick will say.

It wasn't awful
the story was very good
I especialy liked the imagery the story gives to the reader
Please keep writing.

Who. Riveting. I can't spot too many mistakes except for the occasional error. Maybe try limiting your periods to maybe three or four per dialouge insertion or paragraph. Nice work over all. Continue soon.

Don't be sorry for your errors, do something to fix them. Get a beta or at least run a spell check.

I love your story (:
I am SO excited to read the next chapter.
I hope lovely Patrick is alright

That was good, I liked it. But try using second instead of 2nd.
Either ways fine but it just looks better to some people. I use to watch this show a lot. ^^ Update when you can.

It's not a bad start. I don't think you're running a spell check and you really need to do that. Grammar is just as important as the idea.

it sounds very interesting. i haven't seen the film since it was in the cinema, which was probably more than a decade ago, Heath was so cute though!