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DarkAngel010
2009-09-03 . chapter 5
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Mizuki Assasin of the Mist
2009-08-08 . chapter 5
I freakin love Mall Duty...funniest things ever!

I'm quite mad at myself for not reading mre of you stories though -_-

So~~, Hopefully I will read the others,just not right now,beacuse I am ridiculously tired,and I have terrible headache,because I decided to tay up and read this!

i'm glad i di though ^_^!

3/5

Mizuki
Haru-Hatori-Hiro
2009-07-29 . chapter 5
Another amazing story! This sequel is everything I thought it would be and all the new characters were fun. I especially love that Genesis had such a big part! Thanks for such a great read! XD
Kiki Lelsissia
2009-07-27 . chapter 5
Yay! Happy endings for everyone! Marluxia disguised as a plant is pretty awesome. And my reaction to Seifer having a girlfriend was the same as Zack's. Squall slinking around made me laugh. Hmm.. just randomly, was the beanie that Oblivion took last week Seifer's?

Glad Sora and Riku finally made up. And... Marluxia is definitely the King of Matchmaking. I'm not sure it's possible to beat everything he did in the last part of this chapter...

-Kiki
xXxSmidgexXx
2009-07-23 . chapter 5
AWw that was really sweet well done
LiteraryMirage
2009-07-23 . chapter 5
Hahahah nice job of wrapping this up! ^__^ Oh Marluxia... your matchmaking skillz are indeed _special_!
Valentina Ivanov
2009-07-16 . chapter 4
This mall is amazing and where can I find it? I really like what you have going here! I feel a bit bad for Riku, but oh well. :) Cant waite for the next chapter!
Valentina ~VI~
Kiki Lelsissia
2009-06-11 . chapter 4
My favorite part in here has to be Cloud and Aerith's conversation. I love the double meaning behind everything. It just... works. Perfectly. My second favorite part is probably Aerith, Genesis, and Kadaj at lunch. Or was it dinner? Aerith really should know that she can't keep any secrets, especially not from them.

I'm not sure I should be picking favorite parts out of this. I liked the whole thing... Hmm... meh, whatever. I liked the whole thing. I just liked the two parts I mentioned above slightly more. There, that works.

-Kiki
Kawii-Neko-Neko-Chan
2009-05-30 . chapter 3
that uh mysterious blonde waitress wouldn't happen to be namine wouldn't it?
Kiki Lelsissia
2009-05-17 . chapter 3
I have one guess as to the identity of the waitress. Should I say it? Maybe not. I've only ever seen one woman... no, two women paired with Tseng... Maybe three. I don't remember. But only one of those women has blonde hair. So I think I might know who it is.

Operation Matchmaker sounds fun. And probably violent. I like that! :D Hurricane Selphie is a good nickname for her. Or maybe tornado. Because somebody's going to get hurt. Heh. Should be good.

Not knowing what's going to happen in a story can definitely be fun. It tends to turn out okay for me. It lets my brain come up with random ideas and insert them somewhere in the story where they make everything more fun. Did that make sense? I'm tired...

-Kiki
Kiki Lelsissia
2009-03-15 . chapter 2
Mwahaha. Selphie (yes?) chasing two runaway chocobos. Perfect ending. And watching Zexion throw perfume bottle at people always makes my day. If he hates his coworkers so much, why does he still work there? Well... you did say that nobody was hiring. xD Guess that's why. And whoa, Zexion misses Larxene?! Man... it must be bad there. Yeah, Xigbar probably is. There's no way somebody can be that insane without being on something... right? Maybe not... Yuffie's consciences are great. Aerith being somebody's conscience I can see, but Sephiroth? Man, that was hilarious. Ooh... and Squall is having a small dilemma... hehe. Reno hacking security cameras? Win. Reminds me of my friend Shadow. She's hacked the computers at Staples before. Last time we were there she changed the screensavers on 5 or 6 of them. I forget what she put in, but it was funny...

-Kiki
Somebody's Dreamer
2009-03-12 . chapter 2
hahaha! i was confused at who said "wark" in the end and then i read chocobo. i thought Fuu was gonna do something freaky xD can't wait till chapter 3!!
Kiki Lelsissia
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Hope Sora and Riku patch things up eventually. But at least my favorite couples are still together. Those being Yuffie and Kairi, Axel and Roxas, and Zexion and Demyx. No particular order any more. I can't decide on just one OTP... I think I have three for KH.

Rikku's pun was epic win. Un-straightness ftw!

Great start, like always!

-Kiki
Somebody's Dreamer
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
*fangirl squeel* I was waiting soo (impatiently) for this sequel! and it didn't dissapoint, it just shocked me (loves SoraRiku) thank God Roxas is still with Axel =3=
Emerald Moonrose
2009-02-11 . chapter 1
Oh my god. I was SO looking forward to this. Part two of Mall Duty. Although the beginning is a bit confusing with Riku instantly pissing them off and us not knowing why, it's perfect so far.

Can't wait for the next one!
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