OMG this chapter was amazing I nearly cried!

OH. MY. GOSH. Poor Bella! I hope she's okay!

a great improvement... clearly my smutty reading list has had a good effect on you! lol! haha, although you made the same mistake as last time, edward needs to be inbetween bellas legs not straddliing her!

LOVE IT

great chpter... remember to vote on pyp tonight!

LOL! Well, Emmett just had to didn't he }:-)>

i luv it

ugh it seems that they will never be happy! too many complications! ugh. this was short. update soon!

hey! great chapter and on tenterhooks for what happens next!

LUV IT! its really good

YAY!

YOU ROCK!

gosh i'm stunned by how it went from sports camp to having a baby in college. it's wonderful and amazing. i get the name. it fits how Edward and Bella always go back to each other no matter how far you 'stretch' them. please update soon! oh and if something happens to the baby, i will find you. jk i act so weird sometimes. update soon!

wow! so proud of you! that was so good and descriptive!

okay i def dont want anything bad to happen to the baby... but you could always have the him not crying it will scare bella at first then him cry i know it scared the crap outta me my son didnt cry for like 2 minutes seemed like forever or the embelical cord could be wrapped that happened to my friend when she had a contraction it would cut of oxygen so had to do a emergency c section but baby was fine. i find natural births hilarious it hurts mama worse and shes funnier going off on dad lol well imma quit rambling now awesome update!

oh shit update asap please