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hpfan
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
Beautiful story. I love how realistic it is rather then the stories of perfect love that often pop up about Andromeda and Ted.

I feel so dumb though, I don't get the part about not having another baby at all :(
anny
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
i loved it .great job.
Nemesis91
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
This was lovely! I love Andy and Ted and this is almost exactly how I see their relationship being like :)
Kara
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
Ah Andromeda...I love these backgrounds into characters we don't know. Having two sisters of my own, I can relate to doing/not doing something because of them and their happiness. I loved it as usual, and also just wanted to congratulate you on your law school apps (5 months late); I'll be filling those out next year =(
beccaj-ilh
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
This is a really beautifully descriptive story. It shows everything I've always imagined about their relationship so perfectly.
ljp
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
That was absolutely wonderful. I'm pretty crap at these reviews, honestly, but the way you wrote that story was beautiful and heart-breaking. I think you really captured everything I've always thought about with Andie and Ted. WONDERFUL job.
BeautifullySerpentine
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
aw,, dats so sad!!

amazingly written.

xoxox
Update
2009-06-27 . chapter 1
Wow. Again. Narcissa and Andromeda - both not insane, and therefore... well, they must have been close. Yes. Wow.
paper parasols
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
That was gorgeous, and again, I proclaim my love for Ted, not that Andy isn't as wonderful as he is, but Ted's always been special. I love reading stories in his POV, and this is the first story that I thought was realistic and well-written. It's a lovely piece of writing, :)
smaginn
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
i dont understand andromeda, but i dont think i need to. this story is mysterious and i think only you as the author can fully understand and appreciate it. nonetheless, i love it
PoorWalnut
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
I liked this story. I think it makes sense now that Andromeda would only have one child.
bookwormofmassiveproportions
2009-03-26 . chapter 1
I love the metaphor of crystal and diamond, and the broken plate at the end... I'm so jealous that you write so well.
grace
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
this is a really brilliant piece of characterization.
Picassini
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
exquisitely beautiful
planeteer-rach
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
Hey, reading through some of your stuff, after reading the bike one. This is really god. You don't see much fanfic about Andromeda and Ted.
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