SO very impressive. Well written, detailed enough to get a clear image, but not so detailed as to be boring, good plot that stuck with the story-line of the show - sort of. Peter and Gwen's relationship is a little early, but that's what fanfiction's for!

Truly excellent work; well done. I look forward to reading more of you stuff. If there's a sequel to this, or another Spider-Man story on the way, I'll definitely be by again to read it.

Peace!

I really liked it! I'm working on a Spectacular Spiderman story now where his secret id revealed, so I know how hard it is to do 'confession' scenes well... I really hope you continue this, and I'm glad Harry accepted their couple-ness...

A wonderful ending. It was nice to see Spidey get some credit for the capture of Kraven even though some think otherwise.

Loved the return of Harry and how he found out about the change in relationship status between Peter and Gwen. Glad he approved.

well, I liked it, that's really all I can say, it felt like somthing that could happen on the show.

This story is so sweet! I love the ending, but I wish there was more!

Aww! Its over and I really enjoyed reading this!
Gwen and Peter are together! (huzzah)
Kraven the douche bag is in prison! (huzzah)
And its nice to read Peter having a bit of happy in his life! :)
Nicely done! :)

great story

This story has been great from the beginning. I mean I would usually sit in front of the TV and shout at the characters because they weren't getting it right.(Although me doing that has causes alot of people to call me wierd.) Anyway I'm just saying AWESOME job. Looking forward to reading your work again.
LATER.

it's over! I really liked the story, I had my doubts about the Peter/Gwen pairing but I liked them together in the end...

Wow this story is really over isn't it? *Weeps* I have nothing to live for!

Seriously though, I loved this story and really want to thank you for writing it. I throughly enjoyed it and loved your take on the Spectacular Universe.

A few things.

1) I'll always be Peter/MJ but I really like the way you write Peter/Gwen. Through out this entire fic you did a good job with thier dynamic. It worked.

2) The ending and the Liz/Harry tease made me smile.

3) Sequal?

Again, thanks for writing what's easily one of my all time favorite fanfics:)

Awesome story I loved it.

Great ending! I loved the romance between Peter/Gwen.

Harry/Liz? Hm...that's believable seeing as they have a son together in the comics. She's Harry's love interest in the comics, I think primary love interest.

Very nice, I liked how you worked the story up to this point. Plenty of drama, action, and romance.

This is probably one of the best stories in this section, and I look forward to more.

Thanks for all the work you put into this story! I enjoyed it all the way through. The ending was full circle. Harry coming back and the three of them going out together happily. It's sad that such a good thing has to end, but there's really no point in continuing since the plot is done. I hope you'll make a sequel. I was having my own kind spider sense when you mentioned Harry. The fear of him getting mad and stuff would be bad. The whole getting together process is much more tedious and dramatic in the real show, but that's what fanfiction is to really focus on certain aspects. I'm glad you gave it a happy ending and it was nice. Again, I hope you write a sequel! I don't care if it's really not like the series, I just want more good ideas and writing from you. You've still got some remotely loose ends. If I remember correctly Pete and Gwen basically did see that Miles Warren did have some files. Also the partnership with Captain Stacy I hope will be continued somewhere. Harry is back so there could be something there. Well those are just some things I was thinking about. Write more!!

love it!



can Gwen take boxing classes?

when bad GUYs try to take her

she can fight them off