love it! please continue

Cool... Quite cool. I love this story, allright! Bastila is getting a bit ruthless, and while the way in which Carth dealt with the smuggler was a bit 'bonk-in-the-head' way to introduce some friction, it's good enough, none the less... Just... What happened with the whole 'bitten by Rakghoul' thing? Are you waiting to hit us in the face 'surprise!' or something like that?

No! They subdued Revan? *Cries* It probably wasn't the only way, just the most secure one... Yet another example of the Councils hypocrisy, I hope? On that note, hopefully Revan will remember whom he is and break free, due to the bands calming properties... *Sigh* One can always hope... Well, maybe the canon Revan was stupid enough to let the Council get away with deleting his memories... But I damn sure hope they won't get away with THIS!

But it was, as always, a good chapter. I especially liked Canderous' performance, and the fact that he wasn't portrayed as the typical brute-idiot guy some people tend to think of him as. I also liked Mission's response to the whole 'subduing Namenloss' thing... But... Zaalbar seemed a little tame to me during the whole thing. And what happened to the whole 'infected by Rakghoul' business? Apart from Mission running straight to Bastila due to it, it recieved no mention what so ever... Then again, it would not be a small amount of poetic justice if they noticed it later... SURPRISE! Mu-hahahahahahahah!

Cool, good chapter! Nasty Gammoreans, clever Rakghouls, Bastila ordered around like the uptight ** she is, Juhani impaling Quatra... What's not to like?

I look forward to seeing Bastila finally encounter Revan... I mean, they went halfway through the Galaxy, risked the most potent weapon in the Republic, got kicked in the ** and lost a whole planet... All for just one, amnesiac scavenger whom's more likely to be infested by the Rakghoul than not?

Just imagine Carth's reaction to the above. Plus, he lost his boat. And his crew, whom could be considered his family. Oh dear. Just... Oh dear.

You should be writing mainstream! Your description at the very start of this chapter was mind-blowing. I was unsure if I would like Rev being a Cathar, but I am always eager to read something totally different and this is. Hooray for Mish--I totally see her taking him in. EXCELLENT!

Nice story, and nice twist about the Cathar part... Not to mention the whole bat-hawk ** insanity on Revans part. Overall, well written, good grammar and spelling, compelling storyline... Good story! Keep at it! The names of the ships in Chapter 1 were a little odd, considering the normal Star Wars naming conventions, and the whole way Bastila gets chewed out in the second chapter (for no real good reason... Dammit, Vrook, you conservativistical paranoid meatbag). Other than that... Perfect story!

I must find another word other than AWESOME, but it will have to do for now. This is so different and I mean in a good way. Revan as a Cathar for one thing. One thing that got me is the Council saying oh, we can't let Malak get his hands on you, Padawan, but your punishment is to find Revan whose mind you broke and put you in harm's way of being discovered and taken by the Sith. But, that is the way this Council thought, so it was realistic. Looking forward to more.

OMG, the description and this whole scene blew my mind and having rev be a Cathar and also escaping-brilliant and so different. Looking forward to more! Frackin' AWESOME!