Oh man, that was depressing. Wicked game indeed. The song really went well with this story.

Nice!

that was nice, song went excellent with the writing, ciao

Wow, I love it! It feels so sad and painful.. I think you did a really good job writing it.

Wow! I loved that!

Seeing a sequel would make me smile from ear to ear.

:D

:(

*cries* no alice wouldnt leave forever would she *chases after her*

so sad... *tear*

this chapter is really cool..but sad at the same time..please continue..it's really..cool..