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| Reviews for Alternative Jinchuu story |
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   RedWingedAngel002 8/13/09 . chapter 8Very cute. Ari chan |
| RedWingedAngel002 8/13/09 . chapter 7 Nice job. ari chan |
| RedWingedAngel002 8/13/09 . chapter 6 Okay then.. Didnt really expect that. / ARi chan |
| RedWingedAngel002 8/13/09 . chapter 5 Eh? O_O Ari chan |
| RedWingedAngel002 8/13/09 . chapter 4 O Ari chan |
| RedWingedAngel002 8/13/09 . chapter 3 Dun Dun dun. Funny thing that they actually know where his hide out is.. and the fact taht they know what he looks like. Ari chan |
| RedWingedAngel002 8/13/09 . chapter 2 Nice. Ari chan |
| RedWingedAngel002 8/13/09 . chapter 1 Nice job. A bit short but that is alright. However I believe that Tomoe did forgive him- while in the process of loving him. But that is my opinion. ari chan |
| miniwoo 7/29/09 . chapter 8 You wrote pretty well for having English as a secondary language, actually I've seen worse from English only speakers! Good job, short and sweet. |
| KatieB19 6/6/09 . chapter 8 your story is aweasome |
