Reviews for Prey
confidentcoward 2/25/09 . chapter 15
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Lol :D Please keep it going. Don't write a final chapter! Keep writing! Update soon :D

Hollz xoxo
faeriegal713 2/24/09 . chapter 15
I really enjoy seeing Emmett in sweet moments like this. Even when he is being straight forward, he still manages to make Bella feel safe and secure. It's wonderful. And to have Rosalie not be the total witch that we saw in most of the books is a very nice change.

I am looking forward to seeing how she deals with Edward and what her reasoning behind whatever decision she makes will be.
enchantedlight 2/24/09 . chapter 15
love the chapter! update soon!
hotchadobsessed 2/24/09 . chapter 15
Hey great story! It's so interesting and different...

Can't wait to see what is decided.

UD soon
enchantedlight 2/21/09 . chapter 14
great chapter! update soon!
piowpiow 2/21/09 . chapter 14
It's great, I thought sexy Eddie was going to die (it would've sucked if he did, but y'know, the drama
Joykohl 2/21/09 . chapter 14
From now on, that will be how I explain Romeo and Juliet.
oceanluvr 2/21/09 . chapter 13
good chapter
oceanluvr 2/21/09 . chapter 14
Great chapter!

I am really enjoying your story!
Insane Alchemyst Wizard 2/21/09 . chapter 14
This is INGENIOUS! Please, continue the story. Update immediately.
Those Who Can't Write Read 2/21/09 . chapter 4
Oh! I love this, it is so original.
faeriegal713 2/21/09 . chapter 14
That is a very interesting description that you have used and I love the cultural aspect. I know that twins, especially identical twins sometimes seem to have that type of connection that described, the blood leap. There have been many, many cases of twins that were separated at birth leading incredibly similar lives and occasionally meeting somewhere and just knowing that they were looking for the other. I think that the closest 'western' cultural reference I can think of. I think that perhaps Filipinos are closer to their family and the connections they create are stronger, thus why more than twins may experience it.

As for the story, I was expecting to hear that she'll have to be bitten again by Edward if she wants to 'live' but it is interesting to hear it from Esme. I like it!

Looking forward to updates!
faeriegal713 2/21/09 . chapter 13
That's a very interesting reason for why her body just shut down the way it did. It makes a lot of sense too if her body has been altered by the venom by that much, a lot of the vital processes are probably not working. Makes me wonder about her liver producing insulin too... but that's just me reading into things too much. It's bad enough that her body isn't producing red blood cells.

Okay, and the thing with Edward is weird too. Just what kind of connection do these people end up sharing? It makes little to no sense if you ask me. At least from the little bit that we've seen. Just how deep does this connection between them go in this universe?

Anywho, I actually get to read the next chapter, so I will do so and stop pestering you with questions.
confidentcoward 2/21/09 . chapter 13
Wow! This story is awesome! Great twist :D Pretty please update soon!

Hollz xoxo
Fictitious Character 2/21/09 . chapter 13
And I think that's what you would call, an impasse! Loving it so far, can't wait to read more.
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