 starfire1994 2009-12-03 . chapter 13please continue
i love it
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 hockeygirl9 2009-12-03 . chapter 13Yay finally a new chapter! it was very good! please update soon! |
 Hymrill 2009-12-03 . chapter 13Welcome back! And thanks for that beautiful chapter. I have to say that I missed your story.
Merry christmas to you too and hear from you soon! |
 dangitsesshomaru 2009-12-02 . chapter 13ahaha, Souta and the rest of the sneaky kids are going to see Inuyasha have a sexy time with Kagome! |
 tomoe-gozen52 2009-12-02 . chapter 13I had a similar nanowrimo failure, but look forward to finishing my story anyway and enjoying this one of yours! |
 Wispr 2009-10-31 . chapter 12Cool chapter and like how you got a rid of Kikyou.
Wispr |
 Wispr 2009-10-31 . chapter 11Good chapter and as for Inuyasha like he said it's been four years... he is bound to mature somewhat from both time and the people he's been with.
Wispr |
 dangitsesshomaru 2009-10-30 . chapter 12Woah. The Death Tree was a nice idea! Was it Sesshomaru who asked? |
 ShahzysAngelette 2009-10-29 . chapter 12I simply, LOVE your story! I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter! PLEASE update soon! |
 DarkFlameHazeAlchemist 2009-10-29 . chapter 12Good luck in NaNoWriMo! Oh, and Kurama's Death Tree was used against Elder Toguro in the Chapter Black saga. Anyways, good chapter. |
 tomoe-gozen52 2009-10-29 . chapter 12Well. That was a bit of a surprise - I didn't expect Kikyou to go so soon or so quickly or by a hand other than Inuyasha's. Makes me wonder what you have up your sleeve that might be worse than her. I'll miss your updates over November, but wish you the best of luck writing your novel. |
 Hymrill 2009-10-29 . chapter 11Thanks for that wonderful chapter! The more I read, the more I like your story. And about Inuyasha's maturity, be sure that for me, it's more than welcome. Thanks again |
 Kandygurl4 2009-10-28 . chapter 11At first I wasn't sure about reading your story, especially when Kagome and Souta's family died and they just took off without even seemingly thinking about it. But I continued to read and got more and more intrigiued as each chapter went on. I absolutely love it!! I can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon!! :) |
 hockeygirl9 2009-10-28 . chapter 11love tis story so much. i've been looking for a good story to read for awhile and yours is very promising! do you have any good inuyasha stories you can recomend? Please update soon! |
 tomoe-gozen52 2009-10-28 . chapter 11Good chapter! Good note at the end, too. I didn't think Inuyasha was OOC - just more mature.
Two errors in the para starting "Maybe because I've grown up..." should be "since" rather than "sense" and no apostrophe after "I" in the next sentence.
Looking forward to the update. |