You should write someday... maybe update this? It's really good so don't just abandon it.
Looking forward to seeing more. Thank you for writing and sharing this!

I love it when the writing actually evokes the character's voice. Very well done.

Haha I loved it! I thought it was very clever. Can't wait to read more!

*Applause* I cannot wait to see how this series turns out. So far I love it. I liked the Mako comment at the end. lol.

And I didn't know that Mass Effect 2 could be pre-ordered yet...

this was cute. looking forward to more
ch 1 made me tear up... but i'm a sucker for stuff like that

Excellent descriptions, and I loved Kaidan's line at the beginning. It seemed very appropriate. My only problem with this- it was too short! :-P

*Speechless*
Well, that was freaking amazing.

Seriously.

I...
Write more.

I read your other piece "Comfort Food" and all I have to say is I hope you keep writing for Mass Effect. You do a good job.