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trustme83
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
HOT!! i also love how sweet edward is with bella in all the little things he thinks and ways he touches her.
Music ADD
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
I really love the dominant Jasper, it's so hot
yankeesgirl4565
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
Wow that scene in the bathroom was smoking hot! I can't wait to see what you have in store for these three in the next chapter =)
amd422
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
Oh such a tease! I can't wait to see what happens next. So glad to have you back.
BearMistress
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
woo interesting peek... Alice might join the crew... very sinful.
lovedwardalways
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
Oh gosh yes that was hot Edward was enjoying it as well. I love bella's reaction to the gift. Can't wait to see them use the it's they purchased. It will be interesting if Alice is brought into the mix now that she has came out to Bella I wonder if she will proposition Bella about her infatuation with her or if it will be Jasper who will bring them together.
seamonkologist
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
Fucking hell, this story never fails to have me squirming in my seat. Bathroom scene, yeah, fuckhot.

And I'm okay with the cockblocking in the chapter. Because I'm going to go back and reread select portions from previous chapters :D
lexifisher
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
evil author leaving us panting like that. ;) i hope to god you update quickly because the thought of dominating jasper is just too damn sexy and hot. wow! love this story and cannot wait to read more.
fanficaddict6604
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
bathroom scene was definitely hot! Yummy!
PJ Austin
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
Jay! You cockblocker! lolol Can't wait for next chapter. *drool*

~Pam
JenRar
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
Glad you're back with this! And yes, it was HOT!
beckz83
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
Great chapter loved the bathroom scene.
Miss Claire Alice Whitlock
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
OMJASPER! Own me! Fuck me! Use me! Please!
teambellaedward
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
that was great :)
Cleo's Cooper
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
The doctor is in the house...and taking control! can't wait to read what you have in store for us.
;-)
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