I loved this.

That was cute. I like the thing about "It came out with a little more innuendo than I'd intended, than was proper" it was funny. I liked the other stuff too. Like the thing about
"The miserable have no other medicine, but only hope" That was nice

This is a nice one-shot. I liked it a lot, especially how Alice gave Jasper the hope he needed to carry on. Good work.

Oh wonderful! Please write more, continue this, cause it is amzing. I need to read more about them, how they got to know each other and that kind of stuff. Pretty please. :)

Really sweet! :) Well done

aw that's sweet. good job. :)