Damn girl! That was awesome!! I kept thinking in the back of my mind..."that had better be Chakotay with her!!" LOL Very well played and written!!

Not that it seemed you needed one, but I'll be happy to beta for you any time you need!!

Keep up the awesome job!

Whoa.You really had me going there!For the first part I thought it was Kashyk!Great read,can't wait for more!

I love the twist- I was hoping and it was brilliant...

Great story! I enjoyed it and except for a few minor mistakes you did a good job of being a beta for yourself! LOL