Nice story. Sad, but nice. : / Mixed feelings about that; I don't know whether to put a happy face or a sad face!

I can just imagine Jester standing on a couple of crenelations, waving his lute around in the air like some future cowboy! Oh, how funny!

Poor Gunther. I liked that thing about stones weeping in the rain, and I feel so sorry for him!

...o.O
Thats me being speechless...
lol wow i loved it!
its so sad :(...
wah lol
great job!

Oh my. I almost cried. I feel so bad for Gunther! He's one of my favorites. This story really isn't for the faint of heart.

Holy mackerel! My jaw dropped upon reading about Gunther's leg... I feel so bad for the poor guy!

That was really depressing, and moody, and thoughtful, really really sweet, you did portray Jester really well.. I liked it...

Wow, this was quite intense! POOR Gunther! I mean, here's a character that already feels a deep-seated, almost compulsive need to just be proving himself, proving his worth, all the time - and then he's dealt a permanent, disabling, and very VISIBLE blow like that - I think it would just about kill him internally! Very well-done angst fic.

Poor Gunther! I agree with JesterBellsILove, and I am happy that you did J/J. When are you going to update "Lone Wolf"?

Wow, poor Gunther! :(
It's terrible when you think how easy it could be for something like that to happen to one of the knights, especially the young ones.
Heavy stuff, though I adore the writing. I think your Jester-writing is great, actually. And of course, I do LOVE how It's J/J. Thanks so much for this, it's exquisite! \;~)

This was definetly a true gem. Wonderful stuff, and I could really put myself in the moment. Felt so bad for Gunther...

I'm glad I decided to read this!

Is beautiful. I haven't watched Jane and the Dragon for awhile, but still really felt for Gunther.

I also really like the bit you put in about the shocked look on the Merchant's face.

Provocative and beautiful; wonderful work. There's a little repetition of words here and there but other than that it was as amazing as ever.