One of the things I liked about this story is how simple its premise is: let’s put two characters together and have them battle. It’s not that the story doesn’t expand beyond that, but keeping the premise of the story simple allows it to express itself more fully than if the author were to juggle monumentus and interconnecting plot devices. I know. I tried something similar and I can tell you that it was a lot of fun to tinker with.

Good battle imagery makes the fic engaging. The first sentence ran on for a bit, but the rest of it was well-written.

Nya, interesting. An intruiguing battle, though as the characters have no names and are both female it was hard to understand which has which pokemon many times.

-The Breeder of Eevees

1) Superb descriptions. Kudos.