this is good. :) i can already imagine a movie with your plot. :)

i like your story! it was really cute and fun to imagine. also, i liked how you compared different shoes to different guys, along with all the stuff inbetween. it made things really intresting.

i especially liked it when you chose NAruto lol INONARU!

good story! ingenious idea!

Ahh! I LOVE NaruIno!

Clever girl. Grammar could use work but I like the thoughtfulness. Maybe you could expand the analysis for each character

Aw!! The ending was so cute. Naru-chan ino-chi choose!

this was cute!
i liked how you describe the shoes with the guys.

cute..

nice xD

Feminine, but strangely I like it.

I wouldn't think any boy would like it if their girlfriend had compared them too shoes. ^-^

-FunnyLaugh,
Will make you laugh funny.

so cute!

Really great. I loved it.

kawaii! update soon!

This was a cute story! and also in a way clever, I cant wait to see more