hey there plz tell me youre going to write more bloody good so far 9/10

yes! keep going! loved it!

This was great! Thank you for sharing!

I would like to see how this story unfolds, because I bet it will be magical. Seriously. Keep writing.

I think it's a terrible thing that you have only 2 reviews and both are negative in nature.

I can understand what they are saying. A lot of people don't like the idea that Chloe has to change for Clark to love her, myself included. However I am fairly perturbed that someone would actually attack you by saying "How would you like it if someone you cared about died and someone took thier place." That's just awful. It's only a story.

However, in your story I didn't see a Chloe to had to change for Clark to love her. I saw a Chloe who changed and put on a facade to protect herself, much like Clark does as Superman. I believe it's plausible for him to not recognize her at first, especially with her every action screaming "I'm Lois!"

And to me his statement at the end implies he loved her from the beginning, before she changed, and is a subtle hint that she can drop the charade. They both can. Because no matter how many identities they create, they essentially are who they always were, and that won't ever change.

What you have here is a good piece of writing. It has a nice flow, and it is well paced and descriptive. Don't be discouraged by reviews that aren't constructive in their criticism. We all learn and improve with experience. I hope you'll keep writing.

seriously what are you doing, this isn't about chloe turning into Lois, this is her wanting to be like lois, which by the way is unfair to the character Chloe Sullivan.

"I'll always love you, no matter what form you take" Please this again is DISRESPECT, How would you like it if someone you cared about died and someone took thier place, Its definetly not the same. You are probably saying this this has nothing to do with this story, but it has the same principle.
I don't mind chlois fics but do it properly so Both characters get respect.

I think Chlois fans would have a coronary if Chloe acted like this as 'future Lois'. Their spheal is that Chloe already is Lois without having to change who she is (though going by the past few seasons, doesn't seem likely considering she barely acted like a reporter when she WAS at the DP).. so if she started insulting Clark and calling him "Smallville", that's not Chlois theory, that's Chloe wanting to be like SVLois, whom the Chlois theorists hate.