|Reviews for Frantic|
| NeverBeenMerelyPretty 5/9/13 . chapter 4
A rather shorter chapter but amazing nonetheless. Nice fanfic, I love your writing and your other stories as well. Thanks for posting such wonderful stories on this site, making reading worthwhile. :)
| NeverBeenMerelyPretty 5/9/13 . chapter 3
The last line cracked me up :D. Nice chapter.
| NeverBeenMerelyPretty 5/9/13 . chapter 2
While Edward's possessiveness was cute *at times*, I never really liked how he used to stop Bella from seeing Jacob, especially since J helped her through her rough times (which was his own fault). Love this fanfic so far, can't wait to read the rest. :) :) :)
| NeverBeenMerelyPretty 5/9/13 . chapter 1
You should really write more stories in Edward's point of view; you write his character just the way Stephanie Meyer writes, if not, better! This chapter made me a little jumpy & I cracked up at Emmett's line: The two of you would go without me?
| TheOceanCrumb 4/23/13 . chapter 4
very well written.
| Louey06 4/22/13 . chapter 4
This was really good. I never really liked how possessive Edward can be, it's sorta creepy really, but yu did a good job at giving a little bit of rationality to it. So very well done!
| Puremage 1/3/13 . chapter 4
I really enjoyed this brief insight into Edward's mind! It is always refreshing to read such well written and plausible fanfiction. Bravo!
| Guest 8/4/12 . chapter 4
as a bloke it is interesting (and enlightening) to look in on 'overprotective' from the outside.
-there was this bloke up clothes so she had to stay home. her father thought would probably be ok when he got out of hospital... -
| Tracy F 6/18/12 . chapter 1
Excellent!It's witty and humorous; it portrays Edwards thoughts and emotions so clearly as well. Thank you for this. 5 out of 5 stars!
| Eh Bien 1/20/12 . chapter 4
I think this particular part of Eclipse is one that really begs for a glimpse of Edward's point of view. He's placed in an untenable position which Bella, for the time being, is unable to appreciate. You did a wonderful job of showing his side. Thanks for a well written and enjoyable story.
| twirob 9/1/11 . chapter 4
you have such a gift for putting sm in fanfic thanks so much :D
| trythis 7/27/11 . chapter 1
I could feel the frustration in my bones. Good writing.
| JuiceBoxRiot 5/29/11 . chapter 4
oh i like this very much. i love how you write, as well! i like epovs on stuff that we've already read in the books, i really do. especially when it seems to match the story and isn't too ooc. like when it seems to flow with the books expertly like it's meant for it or something. idk, haha. anyway, yeah i love this and can't wait til the next chapter. post soon eh? :)
| AbruptlyChagrined 4/20/11 . chapter 4
Yes, logic won out in the end.
| AbruptlyChagrined 4/20/11 . chapter 3
Charlie and his damn stomach, lol!