Aww, I loved it. Well done. It was a very descriptive and I enjoyed it.

xGeminiGirlx

I really enjoyed this! Really true to the characters (the best characters) and really well written. I really like the last line, it's very clever. I'm not a big fan of fan fiction, but i thought i'd have a browse through my favourite TV shows, and i'm really pleased i did because i thought your writing was really enjoyable. The thing with Demons was that it moved very quickly and left a lot of gaps, and i think you've really succeeded in faithfully filling in this Mina/Rupert gap :) It's really deep, probably made me feel a lot worse for the characters than i did while watching the show, added new realism to them.

Really good piece, with some very powerful lines (particularly the summary line).

In character and a nice insight into their relationship.

Keep them coming :) Becs x

This is lovely, hope you write more. Rupert and Mina make a gorgoeus couple!

Beautiful. So sad and so lovely. And then there's that touch of humour that just makes them THEM. Perfectly done! You've written a wonderful fanfic!

More of this couple is needed!

SD04