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SoloFalcon
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Sweet! Very character-true! Really liking your stuff!!

Off to read more...
Twinfetish
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
aw. That was very sweet of them. "No man left behind" even in food.
Potterworm
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
aw... that was so sweet at the end. good story.
Sterenyk Strey
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
Aw, that was delightful. Really tugged at my heartstrings. I could see our beloved team so clearly. *sigh*
Yummy whump, too! Thank you for sharing.
This one was just recced on the GW whump thread. Realised I'd already read it, but hadn't left feedback. My bad. Well worth a reread.
Port-of-Seas
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
That... was so... adorable. The moment when John confessed that he couldn't lift it... I don't know. It just seemed like it was something that could really fit his character in canon.
shepsgirl72
2009-03-19 . chapter 1
Nice piece of character work. This is so how you would expect John to react to his situation - not wanting to admit he's weak and or ask for help.

He's not good at the whole relying on others thing, bless him!
Passionate Heart
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
aw... this is so cute! i love this story! John's friends are so the best!! :) i'm so happy! Great story! made me all warm and fuzzy feeling! lol. :)
parisindy
2009-02-19 . chapter 1
awesome as always!
Pocus
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
TEAM LOVE! *sigh* the best! Perfectly in character for John to settle for less instead of asking for help. Yay for Rodney making him angry enough to speak!!
Shanthaia
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
wow, cool short story

thanks for writing and sharing again :)

(sorry, I didn't get around to reading and reviewing your submitted story yet)
Flowerhead101
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
That was such a nice story!
Laura-trekkie
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
Aw, John :(. He's so stubborn, so I'm glad his friends know how to deal with him in that mood.
Trishkafibble
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
Aww! The things John gets put through...but the Team is always there to save him, even from himself! And I never tire of reading about it. ^^ Thanks for sharing!
deblease
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
It made you want to cry when John could not lift the plate of pancakes. A really good story.
everybetty
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
This made me hungry and teary eyed at the same time :) Very nice, thank you.
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