Oh my god. I really really REALLY hope you continue this! I'm hoping you'll be kind to us readers and post another chapter!!

You do a WONDERFUL job capturing the Prince and Elika's character. I mean, you make him out to be just caring enough while keeping him distant and aloof enough to keep to his character. And Elika! Oh my, you did an amazing job. She's not overly-stubborn and wavers just a little, but still holds firm in what she believes in. <3 Again, GREAT job! :3

Lovely job keeping Ahriman in there as well. He's still that looming figure and the talk of gods is still a source of friction between the two, but it's not too prominent so that we really focus on the aspect of these two fighting and how they're hesitant to admit they really care deeply for one another.

Okay, enough of my babble. Here's to you lovely writing and crossing my fingers for another chapter! Ta-ta!

rip my heart in two, why don't you.
you took the saddest ending to a video game i've ever seen and made it ever sadder.
beautiful, heart-breaking. i want to ask you to continue this, to make it not so wrenching, but i can't possibly ask that. it's right the way it is.
thank you.

hm poor guy... hurry update!

Great story, kinda of sad. You wrote both characters very well.

Fantastically written. It's nice to see both Elika and the Prince in character. Hopefully this isn't a one-shot...? =P If it isn't, I hope the Prince remains nameless for the rest of the story! XD It sounds really weird when people give him names.