This is good, this is great, I love it! It could possibly use some trimming, as there are a few lines in there that seem surplus, but on the whole it is a very good poem.

But!

This category is called Jesus Christ Superstar. It is in the Plays section. It does not say "Misc. original poetry". If you want an audience who will really appreciate this poem, post it on . It is a wonderful community of original authors who will be happy to give this poem the praise and criticism it deserves, and then the poem will no longer be cluttering up the JCS category! It is a win-win situation! Please don't get huffy!

Thank you for considering,

Adi