wow! That would be a pretty horrible version of jack!
(cringes) Especially the onion and mustard breath.
eck. That's why I don't eat or like onions.
Good ranting fic^^

Omg I can so see this happening! It's like Muffy just acts like she's said and stuff but on the inside she's like SCREW YOU! XD Wow, you are really, really, good at writing and showing actual EMOTIONS in the characters! (Because most of the people in the games are like little robots :O ROBOT INVASION) Okay sorry I'll spare you my strange rants and end the review now XD

Second time reading this and I still love it as much as the first. Sometimes, we all just need some chocolate.
I've read some of your other stories and I have to say, you're a REALLY good writer.

AH! I loved it! This was hilarious and I could SO see Muffy saying this to the next guy who breaks up with her. Very entertaining and quick fun read. Great work!

A frog in the microwave lol!Poor Muffy! i always hated her cuz i though she was a desperate ** but seeing things through this POV is really different! loved it!

Wonderful! That was briliant. I swear on Monday I'll be in class think of this story and laugh my a** off in the dead silence.

Goshes, roflol! Brilliantly done Scarlet! Wow, and I thought I was crazy today...

Lol.

Made me laugh so hard, I mean it. Thanks for that!

>Gamerzgal

Wow! Way to show some sass there, Scarlet! I loved it. You are quite right, its time to blow off those loser boys and move on to shopping, girl times, and, most of all, Chocolate!
Valantines Day is so over rated anyway. (not to discourage all you lovers out there, but it is the time of the year when breakups happen the most.)

Wow... I LURVE IT! Ah-maze-ing dah-ling! I think this is one of your best shorties ever! I felt so mad at Jack as she ranted! AWESOME! I feel like yelling at a guy now...

Whoa! You really captured the angry in this one, who knew Muffy could be so direct?

Great job ^.6

And she's right too, Jack could've easilly gotten pwned by those Jimmy Choos xD

Just in case you didn't see my other comment...

OH MY ** ** ** GAWD. DD: SSCCAARRLLET. DUDEE. HAVE I EVER MENTIONED THAT I ** LOVE YOU OFF?!?!?! That was bloody brilliant. Honestly. Releasing all the inner English in me right here, but that was just...fantastic. XDD I can't begin to tell you my favourite parts, because every single sentence was my total... ** in a box. I honestly thought at the end there was going to be some twist, like, "but I love you anyway", but... haha, i like this more. ** pent-up frustration! ** (insertname)!

You can pull something from anything, honestly. ** talent right there.

And dedicated to partially me?! Aww. You make me life ! Thank you times sixty-nine billion! :DD

My smile kept growing and growing while reading this, but when I hit "...my heart just goes ker-sploo. Like a frog in the microwave." I completely lost it. THIS was a fun read because I think we've all been there at one point or another, and I've got to say, it made my day and possibly my whole weekend.

By the way, I hope you got to enjoy some chocolate! XD

~ Peace and Love

Like I said before... I love the heck out of this story. Now, for the benefit of the other readers I shall reiterate my simile...

It is like orgasmic toast SMOTHERED with bliss butter with a large glass of ecstacy orange juice on a sunny day while rainbows rain from the sky and hot people serve you every whim. :D

Need I say more?

Except that you rock, and are amazing, and I'm very happy to be your friend. :)

~Kuruk