Goodness, I wish Leslie would just realize how much the Grangers love her already! Mrs. Granger practically IS her mum. Jeez. I'm gonna go shouting whizbees if she doesn't come to her senses soon! Haha. Great chapter.

All right. I've discovered that it is impossible to type one thousand in a review without typing ONE THOUSAND. I sigh. Just ignore the 'instead of 10, I typed 10' in my last review, would you, please? And as a simple reminder in this extra review, I still love the story and you're a wonderful author. Keep it up (no rush)!

I have to admit that I feel a little foolish concerning my last review. Instead of 10, I typed 10. I'll have to check over my reviews now to make sure I don't make such simple but annoying mistakes.

Anyways, I just have to say that this was quite an interesting chapter. Poor Wizzie is falling apart enough to show a side of her that I'm sure NO ONE has seen. Hopefully the quadro will be able to think of a plan that will get Snape and Wizzie back together soon.

P.S. I really, REALLY love this story. I've gotten so into it, the same way I was with the actual Harry Potter books. I feel like I actually know the characters. It's great. Can't wait for the next chapter. No rush!

I thought it was amazing that Gryffindor scored 10 points, and all because of Leslie. I love her relationship with Professor Crims, too. Leslie deserves someone who at least acts like a mother to her. And I'd really like to know how they plan to get Snape and Wizzie back together. Guess I'll have to wait. (:

Nice chapter. It's moving a bit slower than the others, but they're growing up. Patience is everything! Keep up the Leslie magic.

-Storm xoxo

I haven't been reviewing so far, partly for the same reason Paranoia Inflicted reviewed. I've said the same things and I didn't want to repeat myself. But I'm as much of an OCD grammar -and-spelling freak as Paranoia Inflicted and I thought maybe it was better to just shut up...

Anyway, despite the technical errors (I still really hate "alright"...would you write "alwrong"?), I actually do enjoy the Leslie stories a lot. This one seems to be moving a little more slowly than the previous ones, but I can be patient. I am also wondering if you are going to follow J.K. Rowling's example and end the Leslie stories after seven books, or if you're planning to continue into Leslie's adult life? I guess the fourth story is a little early to wonder about that, but I'm curious anyway.

I truly hope Leslie will finally open up soon and tell Hermione what's really wrong. There has to be a solution to Leslie's feelings about her parents, and she needs to resolve them!

Good storytelling, keep it up!

When I saw the summary for the first story in the Leslie Perks series, I became curious. I read it and absolutely loved it, and continued with the other two stories until this one came out. I've noticed something all throughout your stories, though, and it bugs me. I'm a huge spelling and grammar freak, so it was expected of me to do this sooner or later.

With your dialogue, you always use a period instead of a comma, and when you have an exclamation point or a question mark, you capitalize the He or She or They. The name is okay to be capitalized, but that's it.

Here's an example: “What?” She asked.
That would be: "What?" she asked.

And: “That can’t happen, Leslie.” Hermione replied quietly.
Correct: "That can't happen, Leslie," Hermione replied quietly.

Lastly: “Harry, you and Leslie are both going to go in there, and never come out. You’re both ridiculously addicted to Quidditch.” She scorned.
Correct: "Harry, you and Leslie are both going to go in there, and never come out. You're both ridiculously addicted to Quidditch,” she scorned.

That’s all the criticism I have. I’m sorry if this wasn’t the first review for your fourth Leslie Perks story that you wanted, but it’s been bugging me for so long. Trust me, I’m not trying to be rude at all. It was simply my OCD kicking in.

Now, with all of my annoying corrections out of the way, I’d like to say that, like I said before, I loved the first story and all the others, and I’m liking this one so far. I’m trying now to write Harry Potter MY own way, and I’m sure that I won’t do as well as you. I am indeed a Harry Potter freak; I know absolutely everything about it, but my fan fiction for everything has never been all that good.

Enough of my rambling, ‘kay? Keep up the good writing. I can’t wait to see the next chapter. If you don’t get another review soon, I’ll be your number one reviewer all throughout the story. I don’t mind. I have plenty time. Ha ha… ‘Til next time!

-Storm xoxo