cool but who's Ms. Ayashi? Do you mean Ms. Asamura?

. Very nice. So this is just your first Tamers fic? Hmm.. I can see you can go on and write some more. We need more Tamers fics! YAMAKI! *glomps*

Great story and I agree Ms. Ayashi is the spitting image of yours!

The rhyming and rhythm was a bit off, but it was nice.

Rhyming poems are so rare these days. No one seems to have the imagination for them anymore.

Oooh weee! Luv it! I'm thinking about writing a story where it turns out that Ms. Ayashi is actually one of the college students who helped design the Digital World and/or a Tamer. That stupid baka Morti too. _

Pretty good for a first effort. Thought I doubt Miss Asagi(English name, spelling may be off) knows about the Digimon, it's an interesting way of putting it if she did.:)