Cool story so far! Very interesting, keep writing!
XD I can imagine Demyx falling asleep on Zexion's bed after jumping on it like mad. That's always a fun time.

really interesting, good job! in the game, what can you do with the shade archive once you synthesize it? plz reply!!and UPDATE!!

Very interesting. I almost came to believe that Zexion really did write this. It's that well written. :)

Cool~!

LOVE IT!
This is a brilliant! I love Zexions point of veiw on everything. I noticed a few gramma mistakes before, not entirely sure where and I'm not going back to check but just to tell you...
Anyways GREAT job. Please update soon or I'll set Saix on you! >=D

Also avoid Marluxia. Because he is Marluxia.
Haha, that was funny.

Drakon out!

Perhaps it is hatred that Zexion has felt.

This is awesome, and just for the record, I agree with everything you said about Mr. Flower Petals, the dude has issues.

Drakon out!

That was quite entertaining. I like Zexion's point of view. Very nice job so far. I liked it... and you are right Zexion is not emo... people just say that.

I found this really interesting--and beautiful! Zexion is so cute :3 You portrayed his point of view so splendidly--I love it! And the notes at the end, adorable. I love Axel. Hee, well anyway, great story!