I just discovered the Bones-fandom two weeks ago and I am a total sucker for Hodgins/Angela, so I absolutely love this story.

Its absolutely fantastic, how she asked about his sleeping trouble, how Jack really tried not to kiss her (that was so cute!) and I really liked how Angela initiated the kiss and then felt guilty about the effect she had on him. *laugh
So please, keep on writing and give me some more Angela/Hodings-moments, please.

Have a nice day,

Isi )

Very, very good! Excellent, and ADORABLE! They were very in character, the dialogue was good, the wording wasn't repetitive overall spectacular. And cute! Great job.

I love the semi-awkwardness that you've managed to imbue into this fic. It's a great look at the start of their relationship and you've captured the dynamic between Angela and Hodgins at this particular point perfectly. Wonderful!

Very cute story. You did a great job with the characters!

Amazing!
It was well written and had perfect characterization. This one shot was a truly touching piece, that I would have loved to have seen on the show
Great job!