really great, i love mona-centric stories.

You are a godsend. Twilight AND PLL? I've never read a PLL fanfic before. This is awesome.

Vera

Awesome!

I can really imagine this happening! Great story. :).

zomg, this is really good, i can just imagine these thoughts going through mona's head :) nice workk

I think you captured her character pretty well...maybe you should have added in something really superficial, like how the new blackberry Hanna got was SO last month or something. It always hit me that Mona was like that. And Hanna didn't die...so why is she calling herself a murderor?

Other than that, that was a pretty sweet little fic.

Kisses! - TT

ya it was good i will definatly read the next chapter

this was really good