Update!(:

(I may have already sent this to you but i wasn't logged in so i don't know if you got it. If you did... sorry for the double!)

So... this may well be the longest review you've ever faced... so prepare yourself if you have the time and if not... well make some time!

First of all, i've read many Jumper fan fics because, lets face it, everyone should be writing about Griffen. Roll credits. Unfortunately as i've encountered many stories that are seemingly prone to success, they all tend to waver towards one thing. One thing that has kept me off of reading fanfiction from a very disappointing experience. They take a main character... one that isn't their own... and they simply... morph. They churn the original lovable character into what their own minds perceived them to be. Granted its not their character. They didn't create the orignal and ergo it's difficult to keep the character walking straight. Personalities turn into hopeless romantics. This is fanfiction website though, so my thoughts are not exactly a condemning notion.

Furthermore... the lack of planning ahead. This notion... will be short. Only because if anyone is guilty of this... it's me. The stories seem to build up without actually knowing what it is what's being built. (I totally just sounded like Captain Jack Sparrow...)

With those two things being said, I have no answer for you as to why i decided to get back on and read. It was random. Literally random. Went to my search browser and typed something in and for some reason fanfiction was picked among my long forgotten use-to-be frequently visited sites. But i was like "hey why not" browsed movies... made a choice between Young guns, Treasure planet, and Jumpers (you can guess which one i chose) Maybe ...six hours later? ... i found myself at chapter 19.

You my dear friend, need to update.
'Nough said.

So... this may well be the longest review you've ever faced... so prepare yourself if you have the time and if not... well make some time!

First of all, i've read many Jumper fan fics because, lets face it, everyone should be writing about Griffen. Roll credits. Unfortunately as i've encountered many stories that are seemingly prone to success, they all tend to waver towards one thing. One thing that has kept me off of reading fanfiction from a very disappointing experience. They take a main character... one that isn't their own... and they simply... morph. They churn the original lovable character into what their own minds perceived them to be. Granted its not their character. They didn't create the orignal and ergo it's difficult to keep the character walking straight. Personalities turn into hopeless romantics. This is fanfiction website though, so my thoughts are not exactly a condemning notion.

Furthermore... the lack of planning ahead. This notion... will be short. Only because if anyone is guilty of this... it's me. The stories seem to build up without actually knowing what it is what's being built. (I totally just sounded like Captain Jack Sparrow...)

With those two things being said, I have no answer for you as to why i decided to get back on and read. It was random. Literally random. Went to my search browser and typed something in and for some reason fanfiction was picked among my long forgotten use-to-be frequently visited sites. But i was like "hey why not" browsed movies... made a choice between Young guns, Treasure planet, and Jumpers (you can guess which one i chose) Maybe ...six hours later? ... i found myself at chapter 19.

You my dear friend, need to update.
'Nough said.

I'm always happy to see an update! Great chapter as always!

Thank you for the update. I'm glad you're not quitting on this. hopefully the next chapter is coming soon.

Ooohhh! Loved this chapter, though it felt a little bit short. But I was starved for an update and your chapter was the much needed drop of water in a wasteland desert of lack of fanfic feed!

So, Parker proving her acting talent was hilarious! And Griffin is really completely incapable of comforting people is he? Talk about social awkward here - that pal is an island, I tell you!
Oh, but the last scene was so ... so ... *argh* I loved it alright! Parker is way too comfortable with touching Griffin all the time! His face in the last scene must have been hilarious - or maybe, he's got used to it by now?

Alright, alright, you are amazing!
Love,
Mag.

PS: Don't be shocked that we are still following your story! I won't stop following until you stop writing, girl! You're just too good to not be read!

Oh my god, this story is so good. I love your OC and how you portray Griffen. hope to see more of this story soon.

oh wow. this story is way more exciting than the movie! I love your character and I'd like to see her tougher side where she gets in a fight or saves Griffin from a paladin. :D
the awkwardness between them is so cute and their actions fit their personalities perfectly. god, I love Jamie Bell.
cant wait for the next chapter! thanks for relieving me from boredom.

Excellent. I've been reading this story for almost a year and I was eagerly anticpating the next chapters and... here they are. I loved this chapter. Your Ocs Parker and Jack are very likable and enjoyable to read about. Griffin is well... griffin, which means gruff, mean at times,no nosense but essentially good hearted. Thanks for the update and hope inspiration finds you for the next chapters!

Omg she kissed him...on the cheek holy shit. My life is nearly complete :) thank you soooo much!

First of all, thank the Gods you're not letting this fic die a slow, gruesome death - I would be most disappointed, and *sniff* heartbroken.
So, *wow* what a chapter, right? Parker is getting closer to solve the Big Mystery, and, Chemistry, my old Nemesis, now we meet again!
I, of course, loved that you explored Parker's and Griffin's relationship a little bit more; I appreciate that you don't just throw these two in and everything is lovey-dovey, it would be most unrealistic. I really love that you take your time in getting these two a little closer - though, of course I'm quite squealing in delight now.
I have a feeling I may have slightly underestimated the power of hugs.
So, I loved it, here is your praise!
Oh, yeah, before I forget, try not to keep us waiting for so long ...

Love,
Mag

Great story. Please update soon

Ahhhhhh please update soon I love this story! And I love the storyline so creative :) please! Update soon

Love this story and how you write griffin and of course the hug scene haha really good. Hope you update soon :)

I love this story. Update soon.