Beautiful! You magically showed us the heart of the Fortress and how it needs its master.

A bittersweet lovestory. I love how you gave an empty edifice a soul. Or maybe Jor El and Lara really did give it their souls. It was beautiful!

Ohmygod - it's beautiful. You have such a way with words - it's positively poetic.

Alright, it is short and sweet. Well, not so sweet, it's quite sad and haunting but I enjoyed it. I was able to feel the loneliness such as a grand beautiful old house vacant. I do enjoy the tie in the end which brings about a small part of hope. It sets up the sequence of events in SR beautifully. I think it's challenging to write something so short and to do it well.