Good job. But longer chapters please. Even if it takes a little longer to write them, it's terrible to get into it and then have it cut off like that.

I am so impatient for more chapters. I have no critique just letting you know I am still reading

I can't log in so this is annonamous.
That was a really good chapter can't wait for the next one. Loved the ending.

All hail Evil! Cliffy!
:)
Borys

ooo thinks should stsrt to come together now. Tx for sharing

more!

So the Herald's have had enough?
Nice to see the mystery thicken :)
Borys

Another really good chapter well done

this story is so good, hope you are able to u8pdate soon. because this is fantastic!

I am so happy you updated! I've been waiting for this! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please don't take as long to update this next chapter because Iwant to know what happens soon lol :)

Welcome to the "We Took Two Years to Update" Club! I'm also a member of that club. LOL! I'll have to go back and reread this story, but the chapter looks great! :)

Please, now you are writing again do not keep your readers waiting another 2yrs for an update. This is becoming a very good thriller. Thanks for sharing

There aren't even WORDS for how happy I was to get this update announcement. But ARGH, your skill for ending on a cliffhanger is still going strong!

I like this.

Love this story, I found it first a few years ago and forgot to favorite it. Iam glad I found it again. Your story line is very fresh and new I hope to see a new chapter soon or when you can.