WOW! This chapter was amazing :D I can't wait to see where you go with this story, it's a very interesting concept that I have not seen being done before. Keep up the awesome work, and please try to update again soon.

i love it

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WOW...umm...hm... ALOT left out...ending was good...the part on the couch with the hair was ok...as i said ALOT WAS LEFT OUT
good job though!