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Alicia
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
I uh umm i mean no what im trying to say is...THAT STORY WAS AWSOME! know you i never write very long.i loved your story i love wybie.i never used these:@#$%^&*those. i use bad words here but im going to use a block.i dont think coraline is *.
James Birdsong
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
Adorable
Owl Emporium
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
This was great! I loved it. (: Good job. So sweet!
Eternal Dumas
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Oh my, that was sweet. :) Lovely and totally in character, five stars.
ColorsOfTheWind122
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
“We didn’t have anything better! What did you expect? We’re retired!”

Hahaha! That's funny. Good job!
Tetsu Deinonychus
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
This was truly fantastic.

A cute, sweet, one-shot that's just the sort of young-teen romance I look for on .

I can't believe it took me so long to get around to reading this one.
lollipop-chan
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
aw this was cute. i want coraline's sweater though :).
LizzySkellington
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
SO CUTE!
Mew Aqua Spirit
2009-05-02 . chapter 1
How cute!
Professor J. L. Nemo
2009-04-19 . chapter 1
BRILLIANT! I love it!
HamPickleSandwich
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
:D:D:D
Nice oneshot! I liked the way you put Wybie's embarrassment down; it suited him very well.
The Faver
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
Squee! *dies from cuteness overload* This is such a good story. I like how nobody spontaneously kissed anybody like in every other tween fic in the universe. Wybie is such a sweetie...Asking Coraline permission to kiss her. Aw! Nice touch with Cat's blue jay.
Cohen's Chicas
2009-03-17 . chapter 1
Aww, this was adorable in every sense of the word. Very sweet for a oneshot with young 13-year-old romance. xD Also liked the bit about the pierced ears- I had a very similar reaction to the piercing gun myself- but it was a little strange that she would change out the earrings so quickly. But that's just plain nitpicky of me, I'm sorry.
Funny, cute, very Coraline-ish as a whole. Well done! :)
ShyDaniChan
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
Wow! the best coralinexwybie one shot I read! You somehow captured a similar feel of the writing in the book and essence of the movie. It was great I wish you'd write more for these two :)
CoralineFreak
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
So freaking adorable.
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