that's it?

This is beautiful! :D
I like how they slowly warmed up to each other's company while they were in the elevator... :)
You are a very good writer YenGirl...

Lol...

XD *cough* Well, well...wasn't that quite a convenient incident? ^_^

Haha, lol. I loved it ^.~ Both guys were adorable >.< Kya~!!

This fic is sheer delight! It was cute, funny and sweet all at the same time! *is delighted that the chocolates from the banner made it into the fic and were put to such good use* XD

I love the way in the beginning you mirrored Zero and Kaname's preparations. So similiar and yet different in their own little ways. :) It seems so right and natural that Zero would bring daisies and Kaname would bring roses. *pulls out her drool bucket at the delightful descriptions of what the two boys look like all done up*

LOL Yori was adorably sly in this, letting both boys promise her room service and never saying a word. I wonder if they had made it up, if she would have happily collected from both of them. *giggles in amusement and nods in approval*

Ah, and then, that fateful moment... they step into the elevator together... :D I love how a perfectly awkward moment of two rivals ending up in the same elevator on the way up to ask the same girl out for a date ends up turning into so much more as they end up trapped there for hours. *chuckles* precious!!

ROTFL yes, uh, better control your temper in there Kaname, *snickers* Somehow 'upset pureblood stuck in an elevator' would probably give anyone a headache... heheh but then, Zero's pacing isn't much better, eh? Loved the way they worked it out, still eyeing each other. ;)

And THEN of course, the AC WOULD go off. Why be trapped in a small elevator in an awkward situation when you can be trapped in a small HOT elevator in an awkward situation? XD ROTFL

I loved the way things progressed as time slowly dragged by, how irritation and stand-offishness finally melted to companionship, and they started finding out how much they had in common instead of how much separated them. :)

Yay for chocolates! Good thing they had them *nods* if one has to be stuck in a small hot elevator, one should not have to be hungry while doing so. :D *gets hungry at the thought and pulls her own candy out of her survival pack* See, it was this story that made me think of putting chocolates in my YG Fic Survival Pack (TM). *munches happily as she sits quietly in the corner of the elevator under her invisibility cloak so as not to disturb our boys*

Hahahah! The sprinklers! Oh man! There we go, why be trapped in a small, hot elevator when you can be trapped in a small, hot WET elevator? XD *laughs as she gets completely soaked as well, hunching over to cover her pack this time* Okay... definitely need to add umbrella to kit... *wipes water out of her eyes, still grinning gleefully at (deliciously!wet) Kaname and Zero's amused laughter* It's true, sometimes things just go SO wildly wrong you have to laugh at them because there's nothing else to be done.

Aw! *watches them cuddle under the coat in delight* I love the part where they realize that they both were ready to put Yuki's happiness above their own. It's so fun when they start really seeing not only what they have in common, but how good hearted the other truly is. :)

LOL! And there go the lights! Why be stuck in a small, hot, wet elevator when you can be stuck in a small, hot, wet, DARK elevator? XD *chuckles* okay, I'm starting to sound like a Dr. Seuss rhyme now. When Kaname and Zero cuddle in a puddle in the dark, and the puddle's in a lift in a hotel in the park, and the... *cough* UM yes, sorry, stopping now...

Yay! Everything ended up okay and they are finally out! All's well that ends well, and even if everything is back to 'normal'... perhaps it's not entirely. ;D

"Actually... Happy Valentine’s Day, Zero." - LOVE THAT! :D Love the whole fic!

very cute. great job ^^

Hi there!

I am Vanecaos hubby, and she recommended me this fic.She told me it was good, but I think it really is better than good, much better than good.

I'm not good at reviews but I'll try my best. The characters are complete, the plot fantastic and I couldn't stop laughting in the first part. The sacond part is very sweet way of understanding between two pleople opotite but mirrored.
And the endind is the true ending between two males who like the same woman.

What liked me also is the fact that Yuri played both cards, I supose with the curiosity of wich would arrive first. I'd like to know wich excuse would she found for the other if the lift haddn't stucked them both.

Thanks for a very good readin'

-giggles-
Entertaining and great because everyone's in character.

lol, aw. That was pretty cute. It's amazing they didn't fight at all. Great ficlet. :D And Happy belated Valentine's Day!

nice story! by the way when would you post what could almost be chapter 11?

Oh my gosh! XD I busted out laughing when the sprinkler came on. Although, I had been eating at the time and some rice decided to lodge in my windpipe X3 I was still laughing though! ^^

And the part where the light blew out just as Zero said something... *nearly fell off out of her chair giggling and pointing stupidly at the computer screen* Dat was funny too~ Those two never catch a break do they? ^^ Of course... at least they gots each other. *fangirl aura swells slyly*

I weally liked this one, too, and I'm definitely looking foward to WCAB's update next week and as well as any other KxZ/ZxK submissions ya upload! :D

okay, i was going to write a really long review for this- as it was awesome.
But! VaneCaos took the words right out of my mouth, and said it far better then I could posible, so:

*insert everything VaneCaos said here*

And I also must said that I too went "aw" outlouad at the end CX
It was such a sweet story, and I loved every minute of it.

WOW, that was beautiful! I really like the ending, because it's sort of implying something. Great work, and Happy Valentine's Day to you too (even though it was yesterday)!

Aw so adorable. I just had a little time to read the story and even less to type a review but since I am back from my trip, I will say how much this story made me melt. Seriously, I was just sitting on my chair by the computer and I said AW out loud!

You already know that I think you are a wonderful writer and I really really enjoyed this one-shot. Happy Valentine's day!

¡Hola! *grateful smile for the chapter* I read it on saturday itself, but I was in a very low spirit and I couldn't find the mood to write a proper review. Your story cheered me up, so I want to thank you! Yes, yes, it could probably fit as a WCAB early chapter. I suppose that if that happened at the stage they're now, things could have ended slightly different *winks*. Mm... maybe you could stuck them again in WCAB, not necessarily in an elevator. Just to know what happens, of course *coughs*.

I enjoyed a lot this story, my only complaint is that the start seemed a bit abrupt, a little like "let's jump into action", but don't take me too seriously. It's just that I'm too fussy sometimes.

*smiles tenderly at Zero's daisies* Poor boy, he could only afford half a dozen of daisies, one of the most humble flowers. I'm sure he has been saving money for months just to buy them. *giggles at matching thoughts and images of Kaname and Zero* Of course, Kaname has to buy TWO DOZEN roses *rolls eyes*. For girls, is more important the intention than the volume, Kaname, specially for Yuuki! *giggles again at Zero on foot and Kaname in a limousine* I know that Kaname can't help being as he is, but poor Zero!

"to take Yuuki out to dinner" *laughs* Yeah, c'mon, let's start the race! For a moment, I was imagining them running like mads along the hotel corridors, pushing one another, with the poor bouquets losing the flowers and knocking at the doors asking for Yuuki. But the elevator breakdown was much better! *nods*. OK, I admit I fast forwarded the action to a... m... more explicit scene *ashamed*.

"Kaname having decided that showing everyone in the hotel what he was by blasting a hole through the lift door with his telekinetic powers wasn’t exactly a good idea" *ROTFL* That would be funny to see... if you're not a human worker of the hotel. I love him when he's angry and nervous :D "The shaded lights on the wall flickered again and a corner of the large mirror cracked as his anger got the better of him" Aah! How I love demonstrations of vampiric powers, they're so sexy!

Le Prestige? Where have I heard that name? *taps her nose with her finger* I think they serve delicious snails there ;)

What must be thinking Yori after the request of these boys??

Uh... chocolates *licks her lips* OK, that could be the start of a veery nice scene, too!

"I never told you this before - but I’ve always admired your strength and even your stubbornness, Zero." Even in this fic, Kaname is always the first to compliment the other, or at least to be honest. Maybe it's because he's a little claustrophobic and needs conversation (Any type of conversation) to endure the situation. "That’s because I was planning to order champagne later on,". Take that, Zero! You can learn from Kaname to have a little more sense of humour.

"the lone sprinkler set beside the speaker came on and a shower of cooling water rained down in the confined lift, happily spraying both its occupants without fear or favour." *ROTFL* That's GREAT! They seem two soaked cats! OK, Yen, stop torturing us, you have to include some similar scene in WCAB (in the stage they're are now on their relation, of course). Soaked to the bones, in risk of catching a cold (forget they're vampires, it doesn't mind) and stucked in some small place. *melts, drools and nosebleeds*
"I – I could only afford a half dozen, however," Oh, you're so cute when you speak so shyly, Zero!
"Yuuki is very kind and understanding, she would be happy with only a single bloom if it came from someone who - cares - for her." Uh, very diplomatic, and true. Well, "cares"? you were about to say "love", isn't it, Kaname?
"Just trying to show off again, huh?" *ROTFL* Yes, that shows that Kaname is in fact very unsure on how to seduce a girl!
"Sleepy?" AGAIN, ZERO? *giggles* I'm going to buy him a little cushion, so he can take a nap every now and then, no matter the place.

*nods at Kaname* Yes, sit near Zero... a little more closer, please. Oh! How cute, ZEro confessing he loves Yuuki to his love rival!! That's probably because of the lack of fresh air.

"the light flickered before going out with a soft pop" ARG! I can't bear much more! YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SIMILAR SCENE FOR WCAB. Stucked. Soaked. Cold. And in complete darkness. *dies* I bet they will not be so shy to touch each other in the darkness. Oh! Oh! Oh! *melts for a long time lost in her pervy thoughts*

"Ducking down, Zero caught up his bouquet of daisies and Kaname did the same for the roses, picking up the box of chocolates at the same time before they both stepped out of the lift, dripping water onto the fifteenth floor corridor carpet . A security personnel was already waiting for them and he had to hide his apologetic grin at their wet and somewhat bedraggled state. The hotel manager was there as well, together with a couple of staff from Housekeeping". That's what I call a trumphant entrance *wide grin*

Uh. Yuuki was very delicate, not joking at the two boys competing to take her out for dinner like two fools. And, of course, Yori saving the situation by letting the boys return to school and changing their clothes.

I laughed a lot, Yen, it was a fic very suitable for St Valentin's Day. I still dream you can rescue some ideas for WCAB *points up*. Thanks!

Oh no! I want to use the "S" word again!! But darn it's is so applicable to this story!
Um... (searches for a synonym to "sweet" but gives up as too much effort).

This was so sweet and funny! I liked it. What a nice Valentine's prez!

Thanks

LP